Monday, 4 November 2013

Blog post 2 (A New Life)

February 21, 2001 - A new kid was brought onto Earth. His name was Hans Azlan! What a awesome name, Azlan from Narnia. He was a little cute and handsome baby who would eat every single thing anyone gave him, well at least until he became six. He started to hat vegetables, the only vegetables he would eat were carrots, corn and cabbage. He was Singaporean - Malay, but very early in his life he moved to KL (Kuala Lumpur) In Malaysia and lived there for seven years. He used to go to a school named Fairview International School, he was in that school for seven years and everyone in the school were his friends ( he was in that school since kindergarten) Then he left, some of his friends were almost even crying.

1 comment:

  1. I love how you start this paragraph - it really grabs the readers attention!

    Make sure you are vivid in your description throughout the post; use lots of adjectives to paint a clear picture and interest your reader.

    - please TAG your post
    - please use some multi-media in your post
    - please take time to read your work over carefully to check for punctuation errors

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